問題詳情:
改錯:(2020·安徽省六安市毛坦廠中學東城校區高三模擬)
sunny 31st, July
It was sunny today and I was in a good mood. Tired of studying or the noise of city life, I come to the ecology park to enjoy scenery and get relaxing in the afternoon. While I arrived at the park, what came into its sight were the thick green trees. The air was fresh. In addition, I could clearly see a path around the pond. Lying on the grasses decorated with various flowers, I felt with ease because all that I wanted was peace inside.
Therefore, with time going by quickly, the sun was setting in the west. So I had to return back home. I would never forget such romantic experience, which was really beyond description.
【回答】
【解析】→and 考查連詞。學習和城市生活的喧囂是並列關係,故將or改為and。
→came 考查動詞的時態。根據第一句可知,描述過去發生的事情,用一般過去時。故將come改為came。
xing→relaxed 考查形容詞。根據語境可知,此處指“我”要放鬆。故將relaxing改為relaxed。
e→When 考查狀語從句的連接詞。while “當……的時候”,相當於during the time that,引導時間狀語從句,後面常跟時間段,when “當……的時候”,引導時間狀語從句,既可跟時間點也可跟時間段。故將While改為When。
→my 考查代詞。句意:當我到達公園,進入我視野的是茂盛的綠樹。此處表示“我的視野”,故將its改為my。
ses→grass 考查名詞。grass指“草坪”時,是不可數名詞。故將grasses改為grass。
→at 考查介詞。at ease “安逸,舒適”是固定搭配,故將with改為at。
efore→However 考查副詞。上文闡述“我”在生態公園裏,躺在長滿鮮花的草坪上,感到舒適。下文闡述時間過得很快,我必須回家了,前後之間是轉折關係,故將Therefore改為However。
9.去掉back 考查動詞。return表示“返回”,back是重複表達,故去掉back。
ntic前加a 考查冠詞。experience表示“經歷”時,是可數名詞,此處泛指“一次經歷”;such+a/an+adj.+n. (單數)是常用搭配。故在romantic前加a。
知識點:其他
題型:短文改錯