問題詳情：
Dick is an Australian man, aged at 25, whose life is full of hardships. He was born without arms and legs. He used to be made fun by others. Everything seemed impossible to them. However, Dick never gave up. After many failure, he finally learned to swim, fish and even surf. That surprised us most is that he completed university education and get two degrees. And now he is the CEO of two companies. When asking about the secret of his success, he thinks a positive attitude is a key to success. Dick’s story greatly inspired me. Compared with him, we are health. However, we are always frustrated when we face difficulties. I think Dick have set a good example to us. We should learn from him and never give up.
【回答】
Dick is an Australian man, aged at 25, whose life is full of hardships. He was born without arms and legs. He used to be made funby others. Everything seemed impossible to . However, Dick never gave r many , he finally learned to swim, fish and even surf. surprised us most is that he completed university education and two degrees. And now he is the CEO of two companies. When about the secret of his success, he thinks a positive attitude is key to success. Dick’s story greatly inspired me. Compared with him, we are . However, we are always frustrated when we face difficulties. I think Dick set a good example to us. We should learn from him and never give up.
第一處:刪去at。aged為形容詞,其後可直接跟數字表示"……歲"。
第二處:在fun後加of。make fun of"取笑"為固定搭配,用於被動時,不能去掉of。
第三處:them →him。此處表示的是對他來説,一切似乎都是不可能的。故應改為him。
第四處:failure →failures。此處failure是可數名詞,表示"失敗的事";再根據前面的"many"可知應用其複數形式。
第五處:That →What。分析句子結構可知,What在句中引導主語從句,且在從句中作主語。注意:that引導名詞*從句時,在從句中不充當句子成分。
第六處:get →got。由前文的"completed university education and"可知,此處也應用一般過去時。
第七處:asking →asked。ask與其邏輯主語he之間是動賓關係,故應使用過去分詞形式。此處是狀語從句的省略,相當於When he was asked...。
第八處:a→ the。the key to..."……的關鍵",為固定用法。
第九處:health →healthy。此處應用形容詞作表語。
第十處:have →has。句子的主語為Dick,故謂語動詞應用第三人稱單數。
知識點：其他
題型：短文改錯
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