問題詳情：
The best advice I received in my childhood was from my dad. He always gives me some advice, but I seldom took them seriously. One day he was encouraged me to participate in a speech competition. So I signed up and after the competition, I did my best to be full prepared. But the moment I stood on the stage, I was such nervous that my mind completely went blank. The experience of lose a competition was really painful. Then, my dad said, “My son, life is like battlefield. You have to lose many time to win the final victory.” Thanks for his advice, I never give up when I do anything.
【回答】
The best advice I received in my childhood was from my dad. He always me some advice, but I seldom took seriously. One day he was encouraged me to participate in a speech competition. So I signed up and the competition, I did my best to beprepared. But the moment I stood on the stage, I was nervous that my mind completely went blank. The experience of a competition was really painful. Then, my dad said, “My son, life is like battlefield. You have to lose many to win the final victory.” Thanks his advice, I never give up when I do anything.
第一處：考查時態。根據第一句的時間狀語in my childhood可知是發生在過去的事，所以都用一般過去時，故gives改為gave。
第二處：考查代詞。因此處是代替前面的名詞advice(是不可數名詞，沒複數形式。)，為了避免重複，them可代替前面出現的複數名詞，而it可代替前面出現的單數名詞或不可數名詞。故them改為it。
第三處：考查時態語態。因encourage後有賓語me，所以用主動形式，不用被動結構，即encourage sb to do sth鼓勵某人幹某事。故去掉was。
第四處：考查介詞。根據本句的意思可知“所以我報了名，並在比賽前（before）”，我盡力做充分的準備。”可知before符合語境之意。故after改為before。
第五處：考查副詞。因本空是修飾後面的動詞prepare的（即做充分的準備），修飾動詞要用副詞。故full改為fully。
第六處：考查狀語從句。因so/such…that…是結果狀語從句的連詞，而nervous是形容詞該用so, 因so+adj./adv.+that…等;而such+(a/an)+n.(單數)/複數/不可數名詞+that…。故such改為so。
第七處：考查非謂語動詞。因of是介詞，後加動詞要用ing形式（即動名詞作介詞的賓語）。故lose改為losing。
第八處：考查冠詞。因battlefield是可數名詞，且根據句意可知該譯成“生活就像一個（a/an）戰場。”，有“一個”的意思就得用不定冠詞，又因fightfield的第一個音素“f”是輔音，故添加a。
第九處：考查名詞。根據句意 “要想贏得最終的勝利，你得輸很多次（times）。”可知此處是指“次數”，time只有加“s”才可以譯成“次數”。故time改為times。
第十處：考查固定搭配。根據句意“多虧（thanks to）他的建議，當我做任何事情的時候，我從來都不會放棄。”可知thanks to “幸虧，多虧”比 thanks for“因……而感謝”更符合語境之意。故for改為to。
知識點：其他
題型：短文改錯
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