假如你是李華，你的美國筆友Mary發來電子郵件詢問你是如何度過上個五一假期的。請你給她回一封電子郵件講述一下...

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 假如你是李華，你的美國筆友Mary發來電子郵件詢問你是如何度過上個五一假期的。請你給她回一封電子郵件講述一下你的假期之旅並談談你的感受。

內容須包括：

（1）Where did you go?

（2）How did you go there?

（3）What did you see?

（4）What did you do?

（5）What do you think of the trip?

要求：詞數80左右，電子郵件的格式、開頭和結尾已給出，但不記入總詞數。

Dear Mary,

I’m glad to receive your e-mail. Now let me tell you something about my trip during the May Day holiday.

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【回答】

Dear Mary,

I’m glad to receive your e-mail. Now let me tell you something about my trip during the May Day holiday. My parents and I went to Beijing. We went there by bus. On the first day we visited the Palace Museum. We were excited when we saw it and we took a lot of photos there. On the second day we visited the Great Wall. It was great. On the last day we went shopping in Wangfujing Street. We got back in the evening. I enjoyed my trip very much. It was a happy experience and I will never forget it.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

【詳解】

1.題幹解讀：該題目屬於記敍文寫作，但寫作時要按郵件格式寫。在寫作時應承接短文開頭；寫作是要按照題目要求來寫作，注意內容的完整*。同時句子之間的銜接要連貫。

2.例文點評：例文采用第一人稱來敍述故事內容符合題目要求；時態採用一般過去時為主，場景描寫細緻；旅行的過程敍述完整且條理清晰。

3.高分亮點：

短語：by bus；On the first day；a lot of；On the second day；went shopping。

句型：We were excited when we saw it and we took a lot of photos there. I enjoyed my trip very much. It was a happy experience and I will never forget it.

知識點：節假日活動

題型：作文