假定你是李華,下個月將要參加主題為“MyFavoriteEnglishPlay”的英語演講比賽(speechc...

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假定你是李華,下個月將要參加主題為“My Favorite English Play”的英語演講比賽(speech contest), 已經寫好演講稿(speech draft)，想請外教Mr. Henry給予指導。請你根據下面提示給他寫一封郵件：

1.      寫信目的

2.      指導內容（詞彙，語法，結構, 口語等）

3.      表達感激

注意：

1．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫，合乎邏輯；

2．詞數100詞左右。

Dear Mr. Henry, 

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Yours ,

Li Hua

【回答】

Dear Mr. Henry,

I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to ask you to do me a favour. Next month I’m going to participate in an English speech contest with the title My Favorite English Play. I’ve finished my speech draft , but I find it still far from satisfactory.

   I’m not sure of the proper expressions of some English words. And there may also be some mistakes in grammar and sentence structures. Would you be so kind to improve my draft in the attachment? In addition, I’m wondering whether you can help me with my oral speech at your convenience.

   I’d appreciate it if you could give me your guidance. Looking forward to your reply.

                                                               Yours,

                                                                Li Hua

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