請仔細觀察下面的圖片，並根據所給提示和要求寫一篇短文。提示：(1)Whatarethemanandtheboy...

問題詳情：

請仔細觀察下面的圖片，並根據所給提示和要求寫一篇短文。

提示：

(1)What are the man and the boy doing?

(2)What kind of influence does using mobile phones may bring?

(3)What is your attitude (態度) towards this behavior?

要求：

(1)短文須包括所有提示內容，可適當發揮；

(2)短文中不要出現真實的地名、校名和人名；

(3)詞數80個左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）。

參考詞彙：secretly; technology; natural; convenient; focus on (集中注意力在……上)

We can see a man and a boy in the picture. The man is______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【回答】

We can see a man and a boy in the picture. The man is teaching a class. The boy is having a class, but he is playing with his mobile phone secretly.

With the fast development of technology, it is natural for students to have mobile phones in hand. They can use their mobile phones to do something they like at any time in any place. It seems very convenient. But the mobile phones also bring some bad influences on their study and life. They can’t focus on their study. They lose themselves in their own life and don’t want to communicate with others.

As students, I think we should pay attention to what our teacher says instead of playing with the phones. What’s more, we can’t spend too much time playing with the phones in our free time.

【解析】1.題幹解讀：本篇是看圖作文，首先要仔細觀察圖中那男人的和男孩在幹什麼，以此為線索，談談使用手機會帶來什麼樣的影響並闡述自己對這種行為所持的態度；書寫時要注意發揮想象力，使短文的內容完整合理。圖片描述的是正在發生的動作，用現在進行時，談論手機的影響和自己的觀點用一般現在時。

2.例文點評：本例文層次分明。文章按照先描述畫面內容，接着陳述使用手機會帶來的影響並闡述自己對這種行為所持的態度；最後闡述自己對課堂上使用手機的觀點，短文邏輯清楚，內容完整連貫。

3.高分亮點：本篇使用的短語With the fast development of technology；at any time；focus on；lose oneself in；communicate with。

高分句型：

I think we should pay attention to what our teacher says instead of playing with the phones.（賓語從句）

It is natural for students to have mobile phones in hand.（固定句型）But the mobile phones also bring some bad influences on their study and life.

They can’t focus on their study.

They lose themselves in their own life and don’t want to communicate with others.。

【點睛】本篇看圖作文書寫前需仔細觀察圖片，根據圖片提示確定文章的線索，根據線索陳述使用手機會帶來的影響並闡述自己對這種行為所持的態度；書寫時要緊扣線索，做到內容完整、連貫；書寫時注意本篇涉及現在進行時和一般現在時2種時態，要避免時態使用混亂。

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