高考即將來臨，家長們也在想方設法為孩子做好服務。下面一幅圖是關於某些家長的做法，請你用英語寫一篇短文，談談你的...

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高考即將來臨，家長們也在想方設法為孩子做好服務。下面一幅圖是關於某些家長的做法，請你用英語寫一篇短文，談談你的理解。短文必須包括以下內容：

1．圖畫內容反映了什麼；

2．你對家長做法的看法；

3．你的建議。

注意：1.必須包括所有要點，適當發揮，不要簡單翻譯；

2．詞數150左右，開頭已給出，不計入總數；

3．文中不得提及你所在學校與本人姓名。

參考詞彙：倒計時牌  a countdown board；過度關心和監管 excessive care and supervision

With the College Entrance Examination around the corner, parents are making great efforts to help their child to prepare for it. 　

【回答】

【寫作指導】　這是一篇看圖作文。動筆之前，需要認真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點，發揮想象。寫作時可按照“三段式”來寫，首先是描述圖畫內容並點明主題，然後寫你對家長做法的看法，最後寫你的建議。寫作時，語言力求準確、簡潔，選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫*。另外此類作文寫作時，時態以一般現在時為主。

【精*範文】

With_the_College_Entrance_Examination_around_the_corner,_parents_are_making_great_efforts_to_help_their_child_to_prepare_for_it. As is seen in the cartoon, Dad is setting a countdown board, saying that the College Entrance Examination is 11 days away, while Mum is cheering the daughter “Come on！”. What is illustrated in the picture is that parents expect a lot of their child and try every means to encourage her to work harder. However, the daughter feels unhappy, or rather more stressed.

As far as I'm concerned, what the parents think is right, but what they do is wrong. Some students feel stressed at school with the time approaching. When they get home, the countdown boards  will cause them to become more stressed, which has a bad effect on their moods. As a result, they can't focus on the study.

So it's necessary that parents know what their child needs most at this critical moment. Giving excessive care and supervision only adds to the child's anxiety. Parents should provide relaxed atmosphere for their child.

知識點：圖畫作文

題型：書面表達