假定你是李华你在这次高考中被自己心仪的大学入取。请写信向外教Mr.Smith表示感谢，感谢在校期间他给予学习上...

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假定你是李华 你在这次高考中被自己心仪的大学入取。请写信向外教Mr. Smith表示感谢，感谢在校期间他给予学习上的帮助。

内容应该包括以下要点：

1. 被入取的心情, 对大学生活的憧憬； 2. 邀请参加8月20日的庆祝party； 3. .....

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，但不记入总词数。

参考词汇: 入取通知书  offer

Dear Mr. Smith，

I’m glad to write to share with you my happiness of being admitted to my ideal college, and particularly I’m writing to convey my sincere thanks to you.

Thanks again, my beloved teacher. Wish you all the best.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【回答】

Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m glad to write to share with you my happiness of being admitted to my ideal college, and particularly I’m writing to convey my sincere thanks to you.

The time I received the offer, I know all my efforts finally pay off. College life distinguishes a lot from senior school life. Undoubtedly, it’s another life combined with challenge and sweet memories. I can’t wait to experience it.

A million thanks to your encouraging words, which never fail to brighten my way ahead. There was a time when I was totally at a loss, doubting that I could make any progress in study. It’s you who helped cheer me up. Never will I forget what you said--- doors open to the very man with full confidence and instant action. Without your help, I could never have enjoyed such a joyful harvest. I really appreciate your instruction. And I’ll appreciate it if you could come to my celebrating party on August the 8th.

Thanks again, my beloved teacher. Wish you all the best.

Yours sincerely,

                                                             Li Hua

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