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Today our class go to climb a mountain. This morning we set off to a mountain by buses. At about nine o’clock we arrived at the foot of the mountain and with the guidance of our teacher, he started climbing. Because at the half of the mountain some of us got tired, we all were very excited. When we got to the top, we cheered excitedly. Seeing from the top of it, the view is wonderful. Unfortunately, when we began to go down the mountain, we were catching in a storm. We shared umbrellas and raincoats each other and walked more cautious. At last we all reached the parking lot safely and got on the bus heading back to home.

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Today our class go to climb a mountain. This morning we set off to a mountain by buses. At

              went                                       the             bus

about nine o’clock we arrived at the foot of the mountain and with the guidance of our teacher, he

                                                                           we

started climbing. Because at the half of the mountain some of us got tired, we all were very

            Although/ Though

 excited. When we got to the top, we cheered excitedly. Seeing from the top of it, the view is

                                        Seen

wonderful. Unfortunately, when we began to go down the mountain, we were catching in a storm.

                                                              caught

We shared umbrellas and raincoats each other and walked more cautious. At last we all reached

                           With                    cautiously

 the parking lot safely and got on the bus heading back to home.  去掉to书面表达：

Ladies and gentlemen,

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