請修改下面的短文。短文*有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增...

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   請修改下面的短文。短文*有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/）,並在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多餘的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，並在該詞下面寫出修改後的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

          2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

One day, I was walking home after school while an old man fell heavily onto the snow-covered road. There were several people pass by at that time, and no one took any action. Some of them said that it was none of their business; others people worried that if they helped him, they might get into a difficult situation. Seeing what had happened, I called 120 immediately. While waiting the ambulance, I took down my coat to keep the old man warm. In no time did the ambulance came. Having helped the doctors carry him into an ambulance, I felt relieved. In my opinion, this is our duty to help those who are in troubles. Only in this way can we live in a great society.

【回答】

第一行：while改爲when      第二行：pass改爲passing      and改爲but

第四行：people刪去/others改爲other      第五行：waiting後加for  

第六行：down改爲off           第七行：came改爲come    an 改爲the          

第八行：this改爲it     troubles 改爲trouble

知識點：其他

題型：短文改錯