假如你是李華，計劃和同學去敬老院（nursinghome）陪老人們國重陽節（theDoubleNinthFes...

問題詳情：

假如你是李華，計劃和同學去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人們國重陽節（the Double Ninth Festival）。請給外教Lucy寫封郵件，邀她一同前往，內容包括：

1. 出發及返回時間；

2. 活動：包餃子、表演節目等。

注意：

1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3. 結語已為你寫好。

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Looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【回答】

 Dear Lucy,

     I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達屬於英文書信，根據提示信息説明邀請Lucy去參加的活動和時間等。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閲讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確三個要點：邀請、時間、具體活動。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的範圍內進行分析、構思和想象。要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關係來寫。本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫。3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態；就本文而言應該用一般將來時態。 4.注意使用高級詞彙和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點説明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明。We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.中用了which引導的定語從句和句式spend time doing。此外，還有if從句以及一些短語如invite you to join us，for a visit to，make dumplings等。

知識點：提綱作文

題型：書面表達