假定你是李华,下个月将要参加主题为“MyFavoriteEnglishPlay”的英语演讲比赛(speechc...

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假定你是李华,下个月将要参加主题为“My Favorite English Play”的英语演讲比赛(speech contest), 已经写好演讲稿(speech draft)，想请外教Mr. Henry给予指导。请你根据下面提示给他写一封邮件：

1.      写信目的

2.      指导内容（词汇，语法，结构, 口语等）

3.      表达感激

注意：

1．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，合乎逻辑；

2．词数100词左右。

Dear Mr. Henry, 

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Yours ,

Li Hua

【回答】

Dear Mr. Henry,

I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to ask you to do me a favour. Next month I’m going to participate in an English speech contest with the title My Favorite English Play. I’ve finished my speech draft , but I find it still far from satisfactory.

   I’m not sure of the proper expressions of some English words. And there may also be some mistakes in grammar and sentence structures. Would you be so kind to improve my draft in the attachment? In addition, I’m wondering whether you can help me with my oral speech at your convenience.

   I’d appreciate it if you could give me your guidance. Looking forward to your reply.

                                                               Yours,

                                                                Li Hua

知识点：提纲作文

题型：书面表达