假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文*有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每...

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文*有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

As the coming of skiing competition in our school , we decided to practice skiing. Last sunday, my classmates and I got together at the school gate. In the early morning, leading by Ms Li, we went there by bus. On the bus we sang some popular songs and play some games as well. Then we told some instructions on how to ski safe. It took us half a hour to arrive. On changing our clothes, we couldn’t wait it to ski on the snow. We were black and blue because of many fall. The sun set after we knew it. Althou​gh we were tired and hungry, we were exciting.

【回答】

 the coming of skiing competition in our school , we decided to practice skiing. Last Sunday, my classmates and I got together at the school gate. In the early morning,  by Ms Li, we went there by bus. On the bus we sang some popular songs and  some games as well. Then we  told some instructions on how to ski . It took us half  hour to arrive. On changing our clothes, we couldn’t wait it to ski on the snow. We were black and blue because of many . The sun set  we knew it. Althou​gh we were tired and hungry, we were .

解析： 1．as→ with．考查介词．表示"随着…"，as是连词，引导一个伴随情况状语从句；此处后面是名词词组，应用介词with．故将as改为with． 2．leading→ led．考查动词形式．动词lead（带领）与主语we之间为动宾关系，应用过去分词形式作方式状语，故将leading改为led． 3．play→ played．考查时态．本文整体时态为一般过去时，本句叙述我们在坐车去滑雪场时的动作，所以此处应与前面动词sang时态一致，用过去式．故将play改为playing． 4．told前加were．考查语态．主语we与动词tell之间为被动关系，应用被动语态be+过去分词，结合整体时态及主语we，be动词用were，故在told前加were． 5．safe→ safely．考查副词．此处作状语修饰动词ski，应用副词safely．故将safe改为safely． 6．a→ an．考查冠词．hour的首字母音为元音音素，前面应加不定冠词an，故将a改为an． 7．去掉it．考查固定用法．can't/couldn't wait to do sth．迫不急待地想做某事，固定表达，wait后面接不定式，故去掉it． 8．fall→ falls．考查名词的数．fall这里的含义是"意外摔倒"，可数名词，前面有many修饰，所以用复数形式．故将fall改为falls． 9．after→ before．考查句意．本句的意思是：不知不觉中太阳已经落山了，表示"不知不觉"，应用before we knew it．故将after改为before． 10．exciting→ excited．考查形容词．exciting令人兴奋的，表示事物本身所具有的*质或特征；此处主语是we，表达人对事物的感受，应用形容词excited（兴奋的），故将exciting改为excited．

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