書面表達廣東正在創建教育強省，學校需要改善辦學條件。你所在的學校正在就如何改善學校現有的設施設備條件徵求學生的...

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廣東正在創建教育強省，學校需要改善辦學條件。你所在的學校正在就如何改善學校現有的設施設備條件徵求學生的意見。請你在學校的官方微博上留言，內容包括：

1．你喜歡學校哪個場所的設施設備以及喜歡的原因；

2．選取學校現有的兩個場所談談設施設備的不足：

①這兩個場所裏還缺少哪些設施設備或物品；

②這些設施設備或物品的缺乏所帶來的負面影響；

③如何改善。

作文要求：

  1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現學校真實的名稱和學生的真實姓名。

  2.語句連貫，詞數80個左右。作文的開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數。

    In my opinion, some facilities (設施) and equipment (設備) in our school are quite good.________________________________________________________________________

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Li Ming

【回答】

In_my_opinion,_some_facilities_and_equipment_in_our_school_are_quite_ example, there is a smart whiteboard in each classroom now.I like it because it makes our classes more lively and interesting.

However, we only have two electric fans in the dining hall, so we feel uncomfortable to have meals there in summer.I think more electric fans should be des, the books and magazines in the reading room are so out of date that we can't get the useful information we not buy more new books and magazines or provide some computers and a network for us to do research?

Li_Ming

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In_my_opinion,_some_facilities_and_equipment_in_our_school_are_quite_ example, there is a smart whiteboard in each classroom now.I like it because it makes our classes more lively and interesting.

However, we only have two electric fans in the dining hall, so we feel uncomfortable to have meals there in summer.I think more electric fans should be des, there are not enough toilets for girls in the teaching a result, many girls are often late for class after waiting a long time in the toilets during the not build more toilets for girl students?

Li_Ming

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