下面短文*有10處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞．增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/）...

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下面短文*有10處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞．

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/），並在該句下面寫出該加的詞．

刪除：把多餘的詞用斜線（）劃掉．

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，並在該詞下面寫出修改後的詞．

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．

As a student，Li Hua works very harder at his lessons，so he is always one of the top student in our class．He loves sports very much that he makes it a rule to play the football at weekends with his friends．Li Hua is concerning about the students who are not good at their lessons，so she always helps them after class．

As a monitor，Li Hua has successful organized some voluntary activities．We pick rubbish in the park near our school every week，and last month we visit a nursing home．What we have done is warmly welcomed by the community．This is how Li Hua is so popular．

【回答】

As a student，Li Hua works very harder at his lessons，so he is always one of the top student in our class．He loves sports very much that he makes it a rule to play the football at weekends with his friends．Li Hua is concerning about the students who are not good at their lessons，so she always helps them after class．

As a monitor，Li Hua has successful organized some voluntary activities．We pick∧rubbish in the park near our school every week，and last month we visit a nursing home．What we have done is warmly welcomed by the community．This is how Li Hua is so popular．

1．harder改為hard；副詞錯誤．句意表達的努力工作，沒有比較的含義．

2．student改為students；名詞錯誤．句中有one of短語，表示其中之一，名詞要用複數．

3．very改為so；搭配錯誤．so…that…如此…以致…，連接結果狀語從句．

4．the去掉．冠詞錯誤．英語中表示球類運動的名詞前，不用冠詞．

5．concerning改為concerned；短語搭配錯誤．be concerned about關心．

6．she改為he；句意指代的Li Hua是男*，要用he來指代．

7．successful改為successfully；副詞錯誤．句中successful修飾謂語動詞organized，要用副詞形式．

8．加up；短語搭配錯誤．pick up撿起；pick是摘的意思．

9．visit改為visited；時態錯誤．句意表達的是過去發生的動作，要用一般過去時態．

10．how改為why；連詞錯誤．句意表達的是原因，不是方式．

知識點：其他

題型：短文改錯