假定你是李華你在這次高考中被自己心儀的大學入取。請寫信向外教Mr.Smith表示感謝，感謝在校期間他給予學習上...

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假定你是李華 你在這次高考中被自己心儀的大學入取。請寫信向外教Mr. Smith表示感謝，感謝在校期間他給予學習上的幫助。

內容應該包括以下要點：

1. 被入取的心情, 對大學生活的憧憬； 2. 邀請參加8月20日的慶祝party； 3. .....

注意：

1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭和結尾已給出，但不記入總詞數。

參考詞彙: 入取通知書  offer

Dear Mr. Smith，

I’m glad to write to share with you my happiness of being admitted to my ideal college, and particularly I’m writing to convey my sincere thanks to you.

Thanks again, my beloved teacher. Wish you all the best.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【回答】

Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m glad to write to share with you my happiness of being admitted to my ideal college, and particularly I’m writing to convey my sincere thanks to you.

The time I received the offer, I know all my efforts finally pay off. College life distinguishes a lot from senior school life. Undoubtedly, it’s another life combined with challenge and sweet memories. I can’t wait to experience it.

A million thanks to your encouraging words, which never fail to brighten my way ahead. There was a time when I was totally at a loss, doubting that I could make any progress in study. It’s you who helped cheer me up. Never will I forget what you said--- doors open to the very man with full confidence and instant action. Without your help, I could never have enjoyed such a joyful harvest. I really appreciate your instruction. And I’ll appreciate it if you could come to my celebrating party on August the 8th.

Thanks again, my beloved teacher. Wish you all the best.

Yours sincerely,

                                                             Li Hua

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