閲讀下面的短文,然後按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。Onceuponatimeinalandfarfar...

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閲讀下面的短文, 然後按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

Once upon a time in a land far far away, there was a wonderful old man who loved everything. Animals, spiders, insects...

One day while walking through the woods, the nice old man found a cocoon(繭) of a butterfly. He took it home. A few days later, a small opening appeared; he sat and watched the butterfly for several hours as it struggled to force its body through that little hole. Then it seemed to stop making any progress. It appeared as if it had gotten as far as it could and it could go no farther. Then the man decided to help the butterfly, so he took a pair of scissors and cut off the remaining bit of the cocoon. The butterfly then came out easily. But it had a swollen body and small, shriveled (萎縮的) wings. The man continued to watch the butterfly because he expected that, at any moment, the wings would enlarge and expand to be able to support the body. Neither happened! In fact, the butterfly spent the rest of its life crawling around with a swollen body and shriveled wings. It never was able to fly.

What the man in his kindness and haste did not understand was that the restricting cocoon and the struggle required for the butterfly to get through the tiny opening were Nature's way of forcing fluid from the body of the butterfly into its wings so that it would be ready for flight once it achieved its freedom from the cocoon. Sometimes struggles are exactly what we need in our life. If we were allowed to go through our life without any obstacles, it would cripple us. We would not be as strong as what we could have been. And we could never fly.

[寫作內容] 1. 以約30詞概括短文內容要點; 2. 以約120詞就 “個人成長需要艱難生活的磨礪”這一話題發表你的看法，幷包含以下要點： (1) 你讀了這個故事後的感受； (2) 敍述當前父母溺愛子女的現象和由此造成的後果； (3) 假如你是父母一方，你會如何磨礪自己的孩子？ [寫作要求] 1.可以使用實例或其他論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閲讀材料的內容，但不得直接引 用原文中句子; 2. 文中不能出現考生真實姓名和學校名稱。 [評分標準]     概括準確，語言規範，內容合適，篇章連貫。

【回答】

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A kind man cut a cocoon open in order to lessen the pain of a butterfly, only to find that it could never fly because of his help. The story tells us that struggles are necessary in our life. (39 words)    The story sets me thinking. Our life is more or less like this. Sometimes, struggles or obstacles in our life are a must for our growth. It is these struggles or obstacles that increase our willpower and contribute to our success. Without these trials, we could never achieve our life goal just as the butterfly did in the story.

Nowadays, with only one child in most families, parents do whatever they can to satisfy the child’s needs and even do for him what should be done by himself, which surely will bring a lot of unfavorable consequences to the child. He may be unable to look after himself without his parents’ presence. Too much care from parents deprives children of chances to grow strong by conquering obstacles. Just as a saying goes, “Flowers from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm”.

If I were a parent, I would first keep him well informed that life is never easy and that he should be ready to face any difficulties. Besides, I would expose him to the hardships in life instead of protecting him from difficulties, providing him with chances to fight for his bright future by conquering challenges.

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