Ithrewmymagazinesintothewastebasketanddecidetojoinin...

問題詳情：

    I threw my magazines into the waste basket and decide to join in Malaysian life. Then

everything came alive. I stared at everything as if I were looking at it the first time. The day

passed fast. I looked at my watch but was surprised that it was 3:00 pm. Soon the train pulled up at

Butterworth. I looked at the people all around me. They all looked beautifully. When my uncle

arrived at with a smile, I threw my arm around him to give him a warm hug. I had never done this

ago. He seemed surprising and then his weather-beaten face warmed up with the huge smile

walked arm in arm to her car.

【回答】

I threw my magazines into the waste basket and   to join in Malaysian everything came alive. I stared at everything as if I were looking at it  the first day passed fast . I looked at my watch   was surprised that it was 3:00 the train pulled up at Butterworth.I looked at the people all around all looked  my uncle arrived at with a smile,I threw my   around him to give him a warm hug.I had never done this  seemed   and then his weather-beaten face warmed up with   huge walked arm in arm to   car.

【解析】第一處：和threw並列用一般過去時。故decide改成decided。

第二處：the first time可作連詞短語，for the first time作狀語。故it後面加for。

第三處：句意：我看了表，很驚訝發現已經是下午3點了。表示順承關係，故but改成and。

第四處：look後面接形容詞。故beautifully改成beautiful。

第五處：arrive後面沒有賓語，不要加介詞at。故去掉at。

第六處：句意：我擁抱他。應該是兩個手臂，用複數。故arm改成arms。

第七處：ago和一段時間搭配，before可以單獨作副詞。故ago改成before。

第八處：他看起來很驚訝。surprised意為“吃驚的，驚訝的”，故surprising改成surprised。

第九處：他笑得很開心。泛指“一個開心的微笑”，不是特指。故the改成a。

第十處：指代my uncle’s用his。故her改成his。

【備註】文章介紹作者在火車上受到周圍人的感染，整個人都發生了變化。

知識點：其他

題型：選擇題