下面短文中有10處錯誤．請在有錯誤的地方增加刪，除或修改某個單詞．DearVisitors，Welcometo...

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下面短文中有10處錯誤．請在有錯誤的地方增加刪，除或修改某個單詞．

Dear Visitors，

Welcome to Hangzhou．Hangzhou is a beautiful city famous for her West Lake．As the number of visitor increasing year by year，we are sorry to see empty bottles and plastic bags floated on the lake，and even flowers picked up and trees destroyed，which does harm to the image of the city．I must appeal to everyone to behave properly．Here and now I strongly suggest：

First，strengthen the environment﹣protecting awareness of the people who throws rubbish here and there random．Second，it's high time that the government takes further measures to protect the beauty of West Lake such as placing good﹣looking dustbins at visitors'convenience．Third，be a volunteer to beautify the lake now and then，but I believe with the joint efforts of everyone there will exist forever the saying"Up above there is heaven； down below there are Suzhou and Hangzhou"．

【回答】

Dear Visitors，

Welcome to Hangzhou．Hangzhou is a beautiful city famous for her West Lake．As the number of visitor increasing year by year，we are sorry to see empty bottles and plastic bags floated on the lake，and even flowers picked up and trees destroyed，which does harm to the image of the city．I must appeal to everyone to behave properly．Here and now I strongly suggest：First，strengthen the environment﹣protecting awareness of the people who throws rubbish here and there random．Second，it's high time that the government takes further measures to protect the beauty of∧West Lake such as placing good﹣looking dustbins at visitors'convenience．Third，be a volunteer to beautify the lake now and then，but I believe with the joint efforts of everyone there will exist forever the saying"Up above there is heaven； down below there are Suzhou and Hangzhou"．

詳解：

1．As改為With；介詞錯誤．句中名詞後接分詞increasing，要用with來構成，即with+名詞+分詞構成with短語，在句中作伴隨狀語．                        

2．visitor改為visitors；名詞錯誤．句意表達的是泛指遊客，要用可數名詞的複數．

3．floated改為floating；分詞錯誤．句中float作see的賓語補足語，float與bottles and bags構成主謂關係，要用現在分詞，即see…doing…看見…正在做某事．                  

4．up去掉；短語搭配錯誤．pick up撿起，pick摘；句意表達的是花被摘了．                     

5．throws改為throw；主謂一致錯誤．句中who引導定語從句修飾people，who指代先行詞並在從句中作主語，謂語動詞要和先行詞people保持一致．                     

6．random改為randomly；副詞錯誤．句中random修飾謂語動詞throws，要用副詞形式．                    

7．takes改為took；句型用法錯誤．it's high time that後接從句時，從句的謂語要用過去時態構成句式虛擬．                        

8．加the；冠詞錯誤．the West Lake西湖，專有名詞．

9．at改為for；介詞錯誤．句意表達的是目的，意思是為了遊客的方便．                        

10．but改為so/and；連詞錯誤．句意表達的承接，不是轉折．

知識點：其他

題型：短文改錯