JohnwastravelingbyshiptoEuropewhenaterriblestormcame.A...

問題詳情：

 John was traveling by ship to Europe when a terrible storm came. A great leak was filling the ship with water. No matter how hard the sailors and passengers worked at the pumps, the water was still rising. The ship was sinking fast. There seemed to be no hope. But the captain told them not to give up hope. He said that there was hope so long as the ship remained above water. He promised that if they didn’t give up hope, he would land them safely. The captain’s powerful will moved them all. In the end he did land them safely.

After they landed, John found the captain to show his appreciation. But to his surprise, the captain said to him that he was the boy of 30 years ago who bought a geography book in his bookstore. John suddenly thought of the boy. At that time the boy didn’t have enough money, but he had gone from shop to shop and believed he could get what he wanted. Finally, he made it. Now , it was the same willpower of him that saved the lives of all the passengers.

【寫作內容】

在一次課外閲讀中，你讀上面的故事，決定寫篇文章針對“毅力與成功”發表自己的看法。內容要點包括：

1．以約30個詞概括故事的內容要點；

2．然後以約120個詞就“毅力與成功”這個主題發表你的看法，內容包括：

（1）敍述你或你的同學憑藉毅力取得成功的事例；

（2）你認為取得成功，主要是靠毅力還是智力？

【寫作要求】

1．你可以使用實例或者其他論*方法支持你的觀點，也可以參照閲讀材料的內容，但是不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱；

【評分標準】

概括準確，語言規範，內容合適，篇章連貫。

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【回答】

In the story, a captain always insisted on doing something, even when he was a little boy. In one voyage, it was just his willpower that made him save all the passengers’ lives.

The story reminds me of my classmate, Linda. In study, she lagged far behind us, but she did not give up. Instead, she kept a notebook in her pocket, and took it out to read on the bus, at the school gate and in the queue before the dining hall.

Unluckily, her English did not improve much. She took up this challenge and worked even harder. Besides, she kept turning to the teacher for help. Finally she made great progress.

Many elements contribute to success, of which the most important is willpower. A man of strong will never gives up before any difficulty, nor does he lose heart whatever happens. So I think willpower is more important than intelligence on the road to success.

知識點：書面表達

題型：書面表達