近年來，我國校園欺凌事件屢有發生，而遭受校園欺凌的學生容易情緒抑鬱、焦慮，不敢去學校，甚至會出現心理問題等嚴重...

問題詳情：

近年來，我國校園欺凌事件屢有發生，而遭受校園欺凌的學生容易情緒抑鬱、焦慮，不敢去學校，甚至會出現心理問題等嚴重後果。 請以 ＂My opinions about school bullying＂ 為題， 寫一篇英語短文，談談你的看法。

提示：

1. What do you think of school bullying?

2. What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied?

要求：

1. 所給提示信息應全部包括，可適當發揮，以使行文連貫；

2.  80詞以上。

參考詞彙：心理問題mental health problems

My opinions about school bullying

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【回答】

【寫作思路】

本文屬於話題作文，談談你對校園欺凌的看法。根據要表達的內容確定並準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。

【參考範文】

My opinions about school bullying

School bullying is a big problem that has got more and more attention in society. Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset. Some students are afraid of going to school. School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems. So how should we stop school bullying?

If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied, I will tell the teachers or my parents at once. It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own.

【寫作亮點】

這是一篇優秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如make sb do, be afraid of, lead to, mental health problem, at once, on one’s own, it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own中it作形式主語以及＂比較級and比較級＂。增強邏輯關係，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。

知識點：其他

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