你的偶像是誰？你崇拜誰？下表是騰飛中學一些學生的回答，假如你是該校的一位學生，請根據下表的文字提示，談談你校...

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 你的偶像是誰？你崇拜誰？下表是騰飛中學一些學生的回答，假如你是該校的一位學生，請根據下表的文字提示，談談你校同學的偶像觀，並適當發表自己的觀點。寫一篇英語短文。

要求：1.80-100詞。（開頭的首句已給出，不計算在詞數內）

2.文中不能出現自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱及其它相關信息，否則，不予評分。

參考詞彙：idol 偶像   fashionable時尚的  wisdom 智慧   respect  尊重

Last week, our school did a survey about “Who is your idol?”. Here are our answers. In the past, we_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【回答】

Last week, our school did a survey about “Who is your idol?”. Here are our answers.

In the past, we thought singers and movie stars were our idols. They always have cool hairs and clothes. They are fashionable. Also, they are talented and can put on funny shows. Their performances are so relaxing that it makes our life colorful. But now we think scientists and medical workers are our idols. Scientists invent high-tech products to protect national security and improve people’s living standard. Doctors and nurses save people’s lives and help them get out of pain and back to health. When our country and people are in trouble, they help people with wisdom, courage and hard work.

In my opinion, those who help us when we are in need deserve our respect and admiration. As students, we should learn from them and study hard to be a useful person to the country and society.

【解析】

題幹解讀：這篇短文要求學生們根據題目中給出的表格，談一談學生們的偶像觀，並發表自己的看法。審題可知，這篇短文的主要內容應包括三個方面：首先是同學們過去所崇拜的偶像；然後介紹現在同學們的偶像；最後發表自己的看法。表格中有非常詳細的內容提示，這些也是學生們組織文章內容的依據和提綱，注意要將表格中所有內容都包括在內，可以適當拓展，補充一些細節，但不能遺漏要點。短文應以第一人稱、一般現在時和一般過去時為主來敍述。

例文點評：這是一篇優秀的作文。首先短文內容豐富、完整，結構清晰。短文采取三段式結構，每段的主題都非常明確。理由充分、合理。其次短文中使用了正確的時態和人稱，語法規範，用詞準確。句式結構完整，符合英語的表達習慣。短文中用到了簡單句、並列句、狀語從句、定語從句、非謂語動詞等多種句式和結構，表達流暢，意思連貫。

高分亮點：

短語：put on；get out of；in trouble；in need；in my opinion。

句型：Their performances are so relaxing that it makes our life colorful.；Scientists invent high-tech products to protect national security and improve people’s living standard.；When our country and people are in trouble, they help people with wisdom, courage and hard work.；In my opinion, those who help us when we are in need deserve our respect and admiration.。

知識點：熱點話題

題型：作文