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I will share one experience with you．With the college Entrance Examination draw near，I was filled with great anxiety．However，I couldn't be absorbed in study，resulting from my failing in the examination．I got very discouraging．Just then，my teacher，Miss Zhang，approached me and said，"In life we all have moments when we can't achieve what we want to．It is natural．Don't allow those moments to weaken you，and turn them into motivation to inspire yourself．"Her words were reminder that provided me with constant encouragement to smile at life．Consequently，I gained that I deserved．

So it is an optimistic attitude which matters most of all．It gives you the confidence to deal with difficulties and to achieve what you want in your life．

【回答】

1．draw 改為drawing；考查with複合結構．因為Entrance Examination 與動詞draw存在邏輯上的主謂關係，故此處用現在分詞形式drawing在with複合結構中作賓語補足語．

2．However改為Therefore；考查副詞．此處用Therefore表示與上文的遞進關係．

3．from改為in；考查動詞固定搭配；result in表示"導致"，而result from則表示"由…導致"，結合句意"我不能專心學習，導致了我考試失利"，可知此處應用result in．

4．discouraging改為discouraged；考查分詞作形容詞，現在分詞作形容詞修飾物，過去分詞作形容詞修飾人，故此處應該用過去分詞discouraged作形容詞．

5．去掉 to；考查動詞不定式，分析句子結構可知，what we want 是一個賓語從句，to是多餘的，所有要去掉．

6．and改為 but；結合上下文分析句意為"不要讓這些時刻削弱了你的能力，而是把它們當成激勵你的動力"，所以此處上下文之間是轉折關係，故用but．

7．yourself 改為you；考查代詞．分析句意為"把它們當成激勵你的動力"，此處用人稱代詞的賓格形式you作作賓語．

8．reminder前加a；考查冠詞；此處reminder是可數名詞單數形式，所以前面要加"a"．

9．that改為 what；考查名詞*從句的連接詞．此處賓語從句中缺少賓語，所以用what連接．

10．which改為 that；考查強調句．此處是一個"It is/was+被強調部分+that/who從句"的強調句型，此處被強調的是主語．

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題型：短文改錯