假定你是李華,上週日你校舉辦了5公里越野賽跑活動。請你為校英文報寫一篇報道,內容包括:1.參加人員:2.跑步路...

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假定你是李華, 上週日你校舉辦了5公里越野賽跑活動。請你為校英文報寫一篇報道, 內容包括:

1. 參加人員:

2. 跑步路線:從校門口到南山腳下:

3. 活動反響。

注意:

1. 寫作詞數應為80左右:

2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

A Cross-Country Running Race

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【回答】

A Cross-Country Running Race

Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.

The students selected from every class took part in the competition. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessarily help as well as encouragement. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.

The activity was highly spoken of, because not only did it provide chance for us to exercise, but also made us more cohesive.

【解析】

【分析】

這是一篇應用文。本篇要求考生就上週日學校舉行的5公里越野賽活動寫一篇新聞報道。

【詳解】體裁:應用文

時態:根據提示，時態應以一般過去時為主

結構:總分總

要求:

1. 參加人員

2. 跑步路線

3. 活動反響

第二步:列提綱(重點詞組)

attend/witness/ draw one’s attention/ manage to do sth./ measure/ speak highly of/ provide sth. for sb.

第三步:連詞成句

1. Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.

2. The students selected from every class took part in the competition.

3. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain.

4. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement.

5. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.

6. The activity is highly spoken of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also makes us more cohesive.

第四步:連句成篇(加入銜接詞或從句)

表示並列的連詞:and/but/or/so…

狀語從句連詞:because/ if/ though/ although…

定語從句連詞:which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步:修改潤*(加入高級詞彙或短語)

【點睛】範文內容完整，要點全面，語言規範，語篇連貫，詞數適當，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關係。作者在範文中使用了一些高分舉行，例如:Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school. 中which引導非限制*定語從句；The activity is highly thought of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also makes us more cohesive.中使用了部分倒裝。

知識點：提綱作文

題型：書面表達