(2019·浙*省稽陽聯誼學校高三聯考)閲讀下面短文，根據所給情節進行續寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。Iwoke...

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(2019·浙*省稽陽聯誼學校高三聯考)閲讀下面短文，根據所給情節進行續寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。

I woke up earlier than my_brother as every other day of the week. I jumped out of the bed, got dressed, brushed my teeth, and had breakfast. Saying good bye to my_mother,_I got in the_car no later than 7：05. I got to school on time, even though my brother came out of the house late as he used to.

It was a Thursday. I was walking to the chemistry rooms when my phone in my left pocket vibrated (震動). I took it out and looked at the shiny screen. As soon as I saw my_father's name on that screen I realized something was not right.

He would not call me in the middle of a school day just to talk. He would want me to focus in school and do well. I answered the_phone,_and my father sounded worried. He told me to find my brother as soon as possible,  walk with him to the school picking­up zone and get in the car with my brother. Our driver would take us back home where my father was.

When I was in the car with my brother my dad called the driver and told him to take us to the hospital. We were going to meet him and my mum there. As soon as my brother and I found about the change in plans, we looked at each other in the eyes. I immediately noticed the fear in my brother's eyes.

To be honest, I was really scared too, probably more than he was. But I did not say anything. We arrived at the hospital. I saw my_dad on the phone waiting for us at the entrance. He was smoking. Seeing my dad smoking made me more worried. I had never seen him smoke before. He hated it. As soon as he recognized the white car, he threw the cigarette away. I looked at my brother; he was looking out of the other window. I did not tell him what I just saw. I did not want him to worry.

注意：

1．所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右；

2．應使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；

3．續寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4．續寫完成後，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。

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Thecarstoppedrightinfrontofmydad.　

Paragraph 2：

Wewalkeddownthehallwithoureyesclosed. 　

【回答】

【寫作指導】　本文是一篇讀後續寫。首先，要求對已有信息有正確的理解，其次，還要理清文章的脈絡。在此基礎上，要順着文章的思路，根據所給線索，進行合理想象，使所續寫內容與前文前後呼應，一脈相承。

【精*範文】

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Thecarstoppedrightinfrontofmydad. He opened the door and I jumped out of the_car and hugged him. He noticed that I was worried right away and with a smile on his face told us he had a surprise for us. “What good things happen in hospital？” When we approached the ward, my_dad told my_brother and me to close our eyes and hold his hands. So we did. His warm hands made me feel more secure.

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Wewalkeddownthehallwithoureyesclosed. Suddenly we stopped. When we walked into the room, my father told us to open our eyes. We saw our mother lying on the bed. Tears welled up in my eyes, but I was not in pain. Right next to my_mother I saw the most beautiful thing I had ever seen. It was a girl. She was sleeping. She was my sister. I still remember that day as one of the happiest days of my life.

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