閲讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文,續寫的詞數應為150左右。LastS...

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閲讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文,續寫的詞數應為150左右。

Last Sunday afternoon, Sandra and I were eager to meet up with a man on Detroit’s east side to help him get ready for a job interview this week. But on the way, we spotted a dog lying near the road next to his owner. We thought he’d been hit by a car. My friend, Sandra Abrahamian and I, had assisted animal rescue groups before and we thought there might be something we could do, so we quickly pulled over to help.

His owner, a woman told us the dog’s name is Bosco, and she was walking him over a mile in the heat to her new home. She said Bosco was an outside dog and no one would give him a ride to her new place. That’s when she and a friend decided to walk the entire way. He was going from a life on a chain in one backyard to another. She said Bosco was having trouble breathing along the way, but they thought he could make it. But just a block away from their destination, Bosco fell down. We could tell he was suffering from heatstroke(中暑). She told us he had thrown up and could no longer stand. Bosco was out of breath quickly, his drool(口水) was also thick. Bosco’s owner said she wanted to give him away because she didn’t have time for him. She said he would never be allowed into her new “home” because her children have allergies(過敏症) and she worried he would dirty the carpet.

I made a call to Kristina Rinaldi of Detroit Dog Rescue to ask if they could help Bosco because it was clear that he was going to die without emergency care. To our happiness, Rinaldi said they could help. At once she told the people at Oakland Veterinary Referral Services that a dog which needed critical care was being rushed in and they must be ready to try their best to save him.

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Sandra drove while I stayed in the back seat trying to comfort Bosco.

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So Bosco is now being called Roscoe, whose critical care and recovery were estimated to be several thousand dollars.

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【回答】

Sandra drove while I stayed in the back seat trying to comfort Bosco. I thought we lost him a couple of times when he was seemingly out of breath and his eyes seemed to close. By the time we arrived, Bosco was wheeled into the animal care center to receive emergency care. Bosco was put on oxygen and was taken good care of by staff there and we waited anxiously for the dog to get out of danger. Rinaldi said another dog in Detroit Dog Rescue had already been named Bosco, and she wanted this new member to have a new name for his new life.

So Bosco is now being called Roscoe, whose critical care and recovery were estimated to be several thousand dollars. It would be difficult for Roscoe’s new home to cover the costs as a non-profit organization. Thankfully, many people who knew Roscoe’s story on Detroit Dog Rescue’s Facebook page donated money to his care. With the help of supporters, Detroit Dog Rescue managed to make it. Once Roscoe was in a stable state, Sandra and I returned to our original mission, knowing we had already been given the chance to help one desperate soul.

解析：本文是一篇讀後續寫。作者和朋友Sandra在去幫助一個人進行工作面試的途中,遇到了一隻因為中暑而生命垂危的*。*的主人説因為沒有時間照顧它,她想將這隻*送出去並且她不會允許*進入她的“新家”,因為孩子們過敏而且她擔心*會弄髒地毯。作者打電話給在Detroit Dog Rescue工作的Kristina Rinaldi。向她説明了情況後,Rinaldi答應幫忙。

Paragraph 1的開頭是Sandra開着車而我待在後座試圖安撫Bosco,再結合Paragraph 2開頭的內容提示可知,接下來的內容應該是去救援中心途中Bosco的情況,以及到達救援中心後Bosco的情況(接受治療,救援中心的工作人員給了Bosco一個新名字Roscoe等)。寫作時可用到的關鍵詞有:Bosco,Detroit Dog Rescue,emergency care等。

Paragraph 2的開頭是現在Bosco被稱為Roscoe。它的急救護理和恢復預計要花費幾千美元,這暗示接下來的內容可能會交代這筆錢的來歷,如有好心人捐款等,還可以進一步延伸內容,交代一下Roscoe的恢復情況以及作者的感想。寫作時可用到的關鍵詞有:Sandra and I,help,new home等

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