假定英語老師課上要求同桌之間修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加...

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假定英語老師課上要求同桌之間修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),並在其下面寫上該加的詞。

刪除:把多餘的詞用斜線(﹨)劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線(___),並在該詞下面寫上修改後的詞。

注意:1.每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞; 2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Although all the students seem very happily at our school, as far as we are concerning, the buildings would be more beautiful if the school could be decorated. We students thought the school looks like a desert and the concrete walls like the grey sky in a rainy day. We could be much happier and are able to study better if the walls of the school could be decorated with posters, photos and paintings, that could certainly broaden our horizons and enrich our lives. Original art works are too expensive, but unless we buy art posters, the cost will be low. Using only little money, it can make our school a nicer place.

【回答】

  改錯：happily-happy  concerning-concerned  thought-think  in a rainy day-on

 are去掉或者改為be  that-which  work-works  unless-if  a little  it-we

知識點：其他

題型：短文改錯