假定英語課上英語老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文*有10處語言錯誤，每句中至多有...

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假定英語課上英語老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文*有10處語言錯誤，每句中至多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），並在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多餘的詞用斜線（）劃掉。 修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，並在該詞下面寫出修改後的詞。 注意：1． 每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。       2． 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoying, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possibly waste all the effort which we have put it in. now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience．

【回答】

Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited^ a bus to come at

                                                  for

a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoying, I decided to walk

                                                annoyed

on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for

  Foot                      than

one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to

                                               the

wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will

    Another                   did

possibly waste all the effort which we have put it in. now whenever I am close to lose

                       That            去掉it

my patience, I’ll think of this experience．

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題型：短文改錯